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<!--Generated by Squarespace Site Server v5.8.5 (http://www.squarespace.com/) on Thu, 10 Dec 2009 17:45:27 GMT--><feed xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2005/Atom" xmlns:dc="http://purl.org/dc/elements/1.1/"><title>Patricia Henley's Journal</title><subtitle>Patricia Henley's Journal</subtitle><id>http://womenwritersgettogether.squarespace.com/journal/</id><link rel="alternate" type="application/xhtml+xml" href="http://womenwritersgettogether.squarespace.com/journal/"/><link rel="self" type="application/atom+xml" href="http://womenwritersgettogether.squarespace.com/journal/atom.xml"/><updated>2009-12-03T01:53:34Z</updated><generator uri="http://www.squarespace.com/" version="Squarespace Site Server v5.8.5 (http://www.squarespace.com/)">Squarespace</generator><entry><title>Almost Winter</title><id>http://womenwritersgettogether.squarespace.com/journal/2009/12/2/almost-winter.html</id><link rel="alternate" type="text/html" href="http://womenwritersgettogether.squarespace.com/journal/2009/12/2/almost-winter.html"/><author><name>Patricia Henley</name></author><published>2009-12-03T01:38:35Z</published><updated>2009-12-03T01:38:35Z</updated><content type="html" xml:lang="en-US"><![CDATA[<p>I like the arc that fall has taken. It's been slow and delicious. I have noticed a few flowers still growing in the fabulous garden at the corner of Stadium &amp; Salisbury. But the most colorful item there is the blue garden hose, still coiled, as it was months ago. The walks I take with the dogs require good gloves now. I've had a fire almost every evening for a month.&nbsp;</p>
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<p>Most of my reading is all about classes and preparation for classes. I'm into NEW SUDDEN FICTION, thinking that I'll use it for my undergraduate course next semester. And 3 AM EPIPHANY, a book of exercises that Tammy Minks suggested to me.&nbsp;</p>
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<p>I get to a certain point in the semester where I write smaller and smaller units of language. A line added to a poem or a few words changed means much. It means I haven't given up the life that's mine in favor of the life that's required. There is always that tension. I accept it as a constant.&nbsp;</p>
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<p>I went to Mississippi right before Thanksgiving to read at a fundraiser for SonEdna Foundation, people who are encouraging the young people to read and write. I read from my Mississippi novel that seems to want to morph into a play. That had to be the toughest audience for that material. I hope they meant it when they said I'd nailed the place. My mood always improves in Mississippi. The night after the fundraiser was spent eating a vegetarian feast above Miss Del's and going out to Red's to listen to Big Jack Johnson perform. There was a general sense of carousing. Lovely.&nbsp;</p>
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<p>I plan to teach a workshop for women writers over 40, here at home, starting in January. A few of us have decided that this will be a good way to while away Sunday afternoons this winter.&nbsp;</p>
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<p>&nbsp;</p>]]></content></entry><entry><title>To Quote Bukowski: "The days run away like wild horses over the hills."</title><id>http://womenwritersgettogether.squarespace.com/journal/2009/11/12/to-quote-bukowski-the-days-run-away-like-wild-horses-over-th.html</id><link rel="alternate" type="text/html" href="http://womenwritersgettogether.squarespace.com/journal/2009/11/12/to-quote-bukowski-the-days-run-away-like-wild-horses-over-th.html"/><author><name>Patricia Henley</name></author><published>2009-11-13T00:30:11Z</published><updated>2009-11-13T00:30:11Z</updated><content type="html" xml:lang="en-US"><![CDATA[<p>I feel negligent, having started this blog, and having ignored it since the demands of teaching have taken me over. I hope someone is still tuning in.&nbsp;</p>
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<p>I work on my play, set in Baltimore, about prostitutes who want to get off the street. I recently made contact again with the agency that allowed me to shadow them a few years ago. They serve the prostitute population by providing water, condoms, clothes, showers, hot meals, and counseling, if someone wants counseling. So I have a contact there who will ask the women anything I require. I feel blessed by their willingness to share. The theater department at Purdue has offered to stage a reading of the first few scenes. This spurs me on.&nbsp;</p>
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<p>Yet, the holiday season is nearly upon us. And I do plan to take time off to play with the children in my life.&nbsp;</p>
<p>I will do my best to keep posting HOME PLATE.&nbsp;</p>]]></content></entry><entry><title>GOING AWAY SHOES by Jill McCorkle</title><id>http://womenwritersgettogether.squarespace.com/journal/2009/10/24/going-away-shoes-by-jill-mccorkle.html</id><link rel="alternate" type="text/html" href="http://womenwritersgettogether.squarespace.com/journal/2009/10/24/going-away-shoes-by-jill-mccorkle.html"/><author><name>Patricia Henley</name></author><published>2009-10-24T16:36:25Z</published><updated>2009-10-24T16:36:25Z</updated><content type="html" xml:lang="en-US"><![CDATA[<p>Read this book! Jill McCorkle will make you laugh, and you will ruefully recognize some hard truths about love, marriage, and family. I'm blitzing through it way too fast, and will be sad to see it end.&nbsp;</p>
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<p>I mentioned to a former student that I am writing a play. He said, "Oh, that sounds good. I'm so tired of describing things." I had to laugh. Eventually after writing nothing but dialogue, though, I long desirously for prose, prose, paragraphs of lyrical rumination, tiny tidbits of character. What's in a woman's purse, under her bed. The grass is, truly, almost always greener.&nbsp;</p>
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<p>&nbsp;</p>]]></content></entry><entry><title>LOVE AND SUMMER</title><id>http://womenwritersgettogether.squarespace.com/journal/2009/10/4/love-and-summer.html</id><link rel="alternate" type="text/html" href="http://womenwritersgettogether.squarespace.com/journal/2009/10/4/love-and-summer.html"/><author><name>Patricia Henley</name></author><published>2009-10-04T11:54:36Z</published><updated>2009-10-04T11:54:36Z</updated><content type="html" xml:lang="en-US"><![CDATA[<p>Yesterday Rita Rud told me that she received William Trevor's new novel as a birthday gift. I went immediately to Von's to purchase the book. LOVE AND SUMMER. She said that she recalls something he said in an interview: before he writes a scene, he writes out everything the character did that day. He needs to know every little thing before he can cut back and write the scenes that matter to the novel. Some people do this in their minds. Some writers keep a notebook with tidbits of the character's day. But I have never heard of this strategy and it makes sense. The problem is that many, if not most, writers do not want to waste time and they would see such pre-writing as a waste of time. It's obviously working for William Trevor who has published 13 novels, 2 novellas, 12 collections of stories, 2 non-fiction books, and 1 children's book. He is 81 years old. It seems a shame to me that many of the young writers I know (by young I mean 40 and under) are not interested in William Trevor's work. I'm not sure why. He writes about love, desire, disappointment, regret, societal norms and the secret fights against those norms, fate. And as Elizabeth Stuckey-French says: He has a wonderful sense of the absurd. There is so much to learn from reading his work; there is so much pure enjoyment to be had. LOVE AND SUMMER starts off deliciously, with a young orphan girl married off to an older man.&nbsp;</p>]]></content></entry><entry><title>I Await Certain Pieces</title><id>http://womenwritersgettogether.squarespace.com/journal/2009/9/26/i-await-certain-pieces.html</id><link rel="alternate" type="text/html" href="http://womenwritersgettogether.squarespace.com/journal/2009/9/26/i-await-certain-pieces.html"/><author><name>Patricia Henley</name></author><published>2009-09-26T11:39:55Z</published><updated>2009-09-26T11:39:55Z</updated><content type="html" xml:lang="en-US"><![CDATA[<p>We have reviews coming soon for Pamela Uschuk's book of poems, Debra Sparks' book GOOD FOR THE JEWS, and that essay by Elizabeth Stuckey-French on using Tarot cards to build characters. If you, dear reader of the blog, have an idea for an essay or a book you would like to see reviewed herein, please contact me.&nbsp;</p>
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<p>I finished the copyedits for a story coming out in THE NORMAL SCHOOL. The edits were tricky -- some tense changes and re-working of sentences. It was a puzzle to solve and I hope we solved it in a way that serves the story. I am always grateful for copy editors. It makes me happy to have a story coming out. It is a youthful feeling -- I can remember the first time my poems were published in a little magazine that came out of Hopkins in Baltimore -- THE CHARLES STREET REVIEW. I lived in a basement apartment then on St. Paul Street and worked downtown at Enoch Pratt Public Library. It was thrilling. The world of little magazines -- how they thrive, and with what beauty and devotion -- never ceases to amaze me. Going to AWP in worth the book fair. It dazzles the eye and overwhelms.&nbsp;</p>
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<p>Do you have a little magazine you love? Please write a comment and tell us about it.&nbsp;</p>
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<p>If you're reading HOME PLATE, I have posted 2 new chapters.&nbsp;</p>
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<p>&nbsp;</p>]]></content></entry><entry><title>What constitutes benign neglect?</title><id>http://womenwritersgettogether.squarespace.com/journal/2009/9/13/what-constitutes-benign-neglect.html</id><link rel="alternate" type="text/html" href="http://womenwritersgettogether.squarespace.com/journal/2009/9/13/what-constitutes-benign-neglect.html"/><author><name>Patricia Henley</name></author><published>2009-09-13T16:55:22Z</published><updated>2009-09-13T16:55:22Z</updated><content type="html" xml:lang="en-US"><![CDATA[<p>Many years ago I heard Ursula LeGuin interviewed on the radio. I had read only one of her books, but I was interested in her life partly because I had lived a few doors from her house near Forest Park in Portland, Oregon, many years before. The interviewer asked her how she managed to be so prolific with young children in the house. And she said, "Benign neglect."&nbsp;</p>
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<p>Now I find myself wondering about how to separate from my animals long enough to be productive. This may sound silly to those people who don't have animals. But those of you who share this issue, you know who you are. I have decided to avoid eye contact with my dogs while I'm writing. This may entail shutting them out of my writing room, but I hope not.&nbsp;</p>
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<p>Women with children or animals: how do you make space for your work?&nbsp;</p>
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<p>I'm reading the fall issue of GLIMMER TRAIN. Last night I read an admirable ghost story in that issue by Sean Padraic McCarthy. Titled "Preservation." It's about a guy whose wife dies in an accident and leaves him with three little girls to raise. There was a tinge of Andre Dubus, the elder, about the story. Very good story. GLIMMER TRAIN never fails me when I want a good story.&nbsp;</p>]]></content></entry><entry><title>Sunday morning in September</title><id>http://womenwritersgettogether.squarespace.com/journal/2009/9/6/sunday-morning-in-september.html</id><link rel="alternate" type="text/html" href="http://womenwritersgettogether.squarespace.com/journal/2009/9/6/sunday-morning-in-september.html"/><author><name>Patricia Henley</name></author><published>2009-09-06T11:11:28Z</published><updated>2009-09-06T11:11:28Z</updated><content type="html" xml:lang="en-US"><![CDATA[<p>It is delicious, waking up early and with a strong cup of coffee reading OLIVE KITTERIDGE. Sadly, I'm almost finished with it. The thing that really stands out about the stories is how she makes you care about people you have probably had disdain for in real life. I think that I sometimes have the urge to write characters I admire or respect immediately. It's still a personal thing. When my first agent told me that she didn't like Kate Banner in HUMMINGBIRD HOUSE, I realized ours was not a match made in heaven. So not everyone is going to love the characters I love. But I think -- and I see this in the work of other writers, too -- that there's the desire to make a more perfect life, to let the character grow and &nbsp;be wise in perhaps unrealistic ways. But Elizabeth Strout doesn't do that. The characters remain mean and uncompromisingly self-centered. Human, in other words.&nbsp;</p>
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<p>Finally, after all the labor of moving, my natural routines are emerging, and they are routines that have grounded me all of my writing life. I wake up between 4 and 5. I feed the cat and make a cup of coffee. It's very strong coffee. I read a little and then begin writing after the caffeine kicks in. Last night, I got into bed a little early -- around 8:30 -- and I was able to return to the story I'm working on. The stream of writing, thinking about writing, wading in that water all the time, has been slow to come back. I've been in a dry season. Now it feels good.&nbsp;</p>]]></content></entry><entry><title>OLIVE KITTERIDGE</title><id>http://womenwritersgettogether.squarespace.com/journal/2009/8/31/olive-kitteridge.html</id><link rel="alternate" type="text/html" href="http://womenwritersgettogether.squarespace.com/journal/2009/8/31/olive-kitteridge.html"/><author><name>Patricia Henley</name></author><published>2009-08-31T11:46:19Z</published><updated>2009-08-31T11:46:19Z</updated><content type="html" xml:lang="en-US"><![CDATA[<p>I may be the last reader in America to get to these fine stories. Several people have recommended them to me; that made me remember all the times publishers have said that readers come to books by word-of-mouth, not advertising. I woke up yesterday morning before 4, let out the dogs, fed the cat, and settled back into bed with a cup of coffee and OLIVE KITTERIDGE. Two hours later I had to put it down in order to save some for later. It is the sort of book you want to dole out slowly, to make it last. Her portraits of place and people are reminiscent of the work of William Trevor.&nbsp;</p>
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<p>I have posted more of HOME PLATE. In revising the Irish sections -- and the Swiss section embedded in the Irish section -- I was excited by the images I had gathered on my travels and the way they seem to neatly fit into the story. This precipitated a longing for travel. Seeing a new place almost always wakes me and makes me want to write. Sometimes I think it would be nourishing to travel with a group of women writers. We could settle in somewhere for a month, explore, write, and share our work. La Muse in southern France has come up more than once as a possible site for such a jaunt. We'll see if this fantasy endures.&nbsp;</p>]]></content></entry><entry><title>Revisions I Have Loved Doing</title><id>http://womenwritersgettogether.squarespace.com/journal/2009/8/27/revisions-i-have-loved-doing.html</id><link rel="alternate" type="text/html" href="http://womenwritersgettogether.squarespace.com/journal/2009/8/27/revisions-i-have-loved-doing.html"/><author><name>Patricia Henley</name></author><published>2009-08-27T12:34:17Z</published><updated>2009-08-27T12:34:17Z</updated><content type="html" xml:lang="en-US"><![CDATA[<p>Fiction writer Debra Monroe told me that moving into a new house is an act of revision. It requires the kind of imagination and problem-solving that revision in writing requires. That's what I've been up to -- making green decisions, buying fabric to have a chair upholstered in patchwork, giving away things I don't want or need. Weeding out the unessential. It does feel a bit like writing. Seeking out the ethical response, inventing the flourish, and getting rid of all those clunky sentences and metaphors.&nbsp;</p>
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<p>To return to writing I've been KINDLE-reading a book called THE PLAYWRIGHT'S PROCESS: LEARNING THE CRAFT FROM TODAY'S LEADING DRAMATISTS. I find that I'm working on several projects, like a patchwork. This makes me a little anxious, fearful that I won't finish one of them, but I'd rather be writing than waiting for the next thing in the novel to make itself clear. The play is set in Baltimore. The glimmer that started it all is the memory of a cold, dank night in 1974 when I went with a shipping broker I'd met in a bar out to a Russian ship in the Chesapeake Bay. It was my friend's job to make sure the captain had everything he needed to be happy during his short stay. We took a launch from a pier at Fell's Point and went out to the bay and climbed the tall metal ladder on the side of the ship and were ushered into the captain's quarters, all oak and brass trim, where I was given a Russian beer, while the men did their business. I was terribly afraid of water at that time in my life, so this was a brave thing indeed. Some might say foolish.&nbsp;</p>
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<p>My other immediate writing task is to revise another chapter or two of HOME PLATE. I hope those of you still rading it haven't given up on it.&nbsp;</p>
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<p>&nbsp;</p>]]></content></entry><entry><title>Finally</title><id>http://womenwritersgettogether.squarespace.com/journal/2009/8/6/finally.html</id><link rel="alternate" type="text/html" href="http://womenwritersgettogether.squarespace.com/journal/2009/8/6/finally.html"/><author><name>Patricia Henley</name></author><published>2009-08-06T09:29:20Z</published><updated>2009-08-06T09:29:20Z</updated><content type="html" xml:lang="en-US"><![CDATA[<p>I have been away from WWGT because of The Longest Move in My Personal History. Today I close on the new (old) house and the moving, painting, installing electronics, and unpacking will all take place in the next two weeks. I have committed to having an MFA party on September 10. Deadlines are good.&nbsp;</p>
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<p>Meanwhile, those of you teaching this fall -- enjoy the last few weeks of freedom.&nbsp;</p>]]></content></entry></feed>